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JASantiago88

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Report this May. 06 2012, 5:56 am

 



Plot: In 237X: After the War of the Dominion. The Federation tries to recover from the loss of the War despite winning the war. Starfleet is trying to go back to the exploration backed by the Klingon Government. Due to the Recovery, Independent human planets had formed an alliance calling themselves the Allied Colonial Forces. The ACF is modeled from the 21th century Earth. With the Raising power of the ACF, it started a Federation Cold War with the Romulian backing.


Frist Episode: Meanwhile The newly starship-class Otomo USS Eclipse have been commissioned by the Starfleet resume Space Exploration. During their Voyage they encounter a Scorpion Class Starship, the ACF flagship, destroying Cardassian ship. So the Eclipse have to find a way to stop the ship.


 


Cast of Characters:


 


Captian Michelle Lanley


Bio: A veteran of the Dominion War, after the war she was awarded the Rank of Captian. Her history is shown that her captian lead her crew to a fleet of Jem'Hadar attack ships despite Starfleet ordering him not to do so. So she has nightmares of what should of been done. Her Alignment is lawful Neutral


Ideal Actress: Gabrielle Union


 



 


Commander Chizuru Kuzunoha: Family Wipeout by the Breen attack, leaving her with her brother. So She requested to be commission to the a starship. The Eclipse was the first one she picked. Doesn't really care much for The Federation, due to the fact that she feels that the War can be adverted. Alignment neutral.


Chiaki Kuriyama



 


 


Chief Medical Officer En Sha: A Bajorian officer transfered from Bajor on the orders of the Bajorian Government. He's a father to two children


Arnold Vosloo



 


Klingon Liaison/Tactical Officer: Alexander Rozhenko: Grew From a confused young man to a Gunslinger Klingon. After being first hand in the Dominion War he grew a Klingon and a human. He kinda like Spike Spelgle from Cowboy Bebop.


Shasa Roz



 


Chief Engineer: Vincent Faire: Newly Promoted Engineer. An Everyman. Divorced twice, right now he's having a hard time seeing his family.



 


 


Helmsman: Ensign Aisling Scalleta: Fresh out of the academy. She is quiet and serious. Looks up to Commander Kuzunoha as a big sister figure.



 


Admiral Jessica Cruz: She was the one who helped with the Rebuiding of Cardassia. After the War she sensed that Starfleet is changing drastically. Very ambitious. Aimes to be Head of Starfleet. Close friends with Lanley. Because of the Federation Cold War She secretly sends the Eclipse to investaged the Scorpion Starship.



So what do you think?


Mitchz95

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Report this May. 06 2012, 12:35 pm

Why is the "ACF" being hostile towards the Cardassians? Is it another Maquis?


"The future is in the hands of those who explore... And from all the beauty they discover while crossing perpetually receding frontiers, they develop for nature and for humankind an infinite love." - Jacques Yves Cousteau

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Report this May. 06 2012, 12:56 pm

Should of been more detailed with the Plot:


Plot: The ACF is more than the Maquis. They are more organized, and headed by a Corperation (think OCP From Robocop). Since after the War Romulians were trying to take over Cardassia by setting up a puppet government (think Vietnam). Since the Federation and The Klingon Empire are trying to recover, The Romulians have set up a puppet Government and Funding the ACF. Since some Cardassians speaking against the government. Some had left to DS9, in doing so The Scorpion intercepts the ship and destroys it. So Starfleet sends the eclipse to investage. The ACF claims that since the scorpion is the UMSS (Unmaned Starship) that it malfunctioned.

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Report this May. 06 2012, 1:11 pm

what do you think of the cast

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Report this May. 06 2012, 7:25 pm

I gave it an A. I liked the backstory and the cast.

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Report this May. 06 2012, 7:47 pm

u know I wanted to put takeshi kaneshiro as the second officer. But After seeing a few movies of Kuriyama, I think Union and Kuriyama can work off each other. Cyniclism (Kuriyama) Vs Optimism (Union).


Also After seeing Roz in Caprica, He can pull off Alexander. A Klingon who writes his own code of Honor

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Report this May. 07 2012, 4:50 am

it would be funny to have there.

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Report this May. 07 2012, 2:57 pm

Episode 2: The The crew gets a distress call from a Space Station in the Vulcan System. So the captian sends a away team to investage. They find the station deserted. Upon investagating the station, they hear voices. Then Ensing Scalleta and Dr. En gets transported to where the station personel is at and they found out that the flux is no accident

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Report this May. 07 2012, 4:51 pm

You're getting points from me for creativity and casting , JAS ! You have an interesting idea , but it's undeveloped . It's some sort of post-apocalyptic Dominion theme , and You should develop it into a full fan fiction story ! 7/10 which means a B- , at the moment ! Best of Luck with It !

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Report this May. 07 2012, 4:57 pm

Well this is a fan idea..so the point is to talk about it and what ifs

Mitchz95

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Report this May. 07 2012, 5:05 pm

I like it for the most part, but maybe make it a bit less...dark. Star Trek is supposed to be about a brighter future, remember? Some darkness is fine, but not too much.


"The future is in the hands of those who explore... And from all the beauty they discover while crossing perpetually receding frontiers, they develop for nature and for humankind an infinite love." - Jacques Yves Cousteau

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Report this May. 07 2012, 5:19 pm

Well the same can be said about Batman. Mind u darkness makes u appreciate the light. Also its more realistic tpdeal with the social issues of a post war society.

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Report this May. 07 2012, 9:16 pm

Think of something like LA Noire.

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Report this May. 08 2012, 10:50 pm

I would prefer Jean Reno , instead of Gerard Depardieu , for the Role of Chief Engineer Vincent Faire !!

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Report this May. 09 2012, 3:52 pm

You knoe Jean Reno is a good choice.


 

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