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let's do a storyline episode right here!

lamoglia

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Report this Jul. 27 2009, 6:21 pm

so i just had a great idea. maybe it's been done. i don't konw. everyone write a little of the story as we go and see where it heads.

i'll start ( you can make it long or short when it's yoru turn but leave it open so someone can continue it. I'll close it when i think it's done). let's make this story take place after SISKO RETURNS from the wormhole.....

"Sisko awakens to find himself in a forest. He immediately assumes he's in New Orleans, but realizes he's on Bajor. Slowly he realizes he was with the prophets. How long, he doesn't know. He gets up off the ground and starts walking..."

now someone take up from there...... wee

TheFounder

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Report this Jul. 28 2009, 1:01 am

Sisko realizes how boring it was living inside of an infinite white space so he cuts a deal with the pah-wraiths. They send him to the world he knew as Benny Russel but this time he is a white man.

He goes on to write and produce for television and movies. He lands a deal with Paramount to write a script for a decades old franchise that has been lagging. While he keeps the basic elements of the franchise's original series, he wants a fresh start so he and his buddies come up with an alternate timeline scenario. He makes lots of money.

The end.

OtakuJo

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Report this Jul. 28 2009, 1:22 am

Well that's no fair I was kind of thinking this would be fun.

TheFounder

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Report this Jul. 28 2009, 1:26 am

Quote (OtakuJo @ July 27 2009, 10:22 pm)
Well that's no fair I was kind of thinking this would be fun.

You can start up the sequel.

RedShirtGuyNumber1001

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Report this Jul. 28 2009, 6:29 pm

Sisko is dead, however I think a story about Odo would have been nice.  How about Odo leading a movement for better relations between founders and alpha quadrant citizens, however there is still a considerable amount of distrust and bitterness on both sides.  Many people on both sides still would love to finish the job because they have all lost someone important....continue...??

OtakuJo

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Report this Jul. 28 2009, 7:05 pm

It starts with an unidentified Dominion vessel being seen at the entrance to the Gamma side of the wormhole by a Federation patrol ship. They don't know what its doing there -- but they are contacted by the vessel and find that Odo and possibly a ninth Weyoun are on board. TBC.

lamoglia

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Report this Jul. 29 2009, 12:02 am

Quote (TheFounder @ July 28 2009, 1:01 am)
Sisko realizes how boring it was living inside of an infinite white space so he cuts a deal with the pah-wraiths. They send him to the world he knew as Benny Russel but this time he is a white man.

He goes on to write and produce for television and movies. He lands a deal with Paramount to write a script for a decades old franchise that has been lagging. While he keeps the basic elements of the franchise's original series, he wants a fresh start so he and his buddies come up with an alternate timeline scenario. He makes lots of money.

The end.

LOL. I LAUGHED SO HARD I CRIED.
anyway funny and all let's try and do this
lol
that was good though

lamoglia

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Report this Jul. 29 2009, 12:03 am

Quote (OtakuJo @ July 28 2009, 7:05 pm)
It starts with an unidentified Dominion vessel being seen at the entrance to the Gamma side of the wormhole by a Federation patrol ship. They don't know what its doing there -- but they are contacted by the vessel and find that Odo and possibly a ninth Weyoun are on board. TBC.

ok we'll take it from here. the odo back story is perfect. this part can be the first visual scene.

lamoglia

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Report this Jul. 29 2009, 12:09 am

The patrol ship stops and requests what the status of the dominion ship is. Having nothing but warships, the dominion still gives an uneasy feeling to all of those who come in contact with them. Weyoun opens hailing frequencies. "Greetings from the Dominion. We are in the process of conveying the founder to Deep Space Nine. We know our visit was not announced, however we feel our mission far outweighs any break of protocol. You may escort us throught the worm hole if you wish." The ascerbic attitude of Weyound is still a lingering reminder to all of those not of the Dominion that it will still take time for any large change in attitude and policy to take place. The commander of the patrol ship acknowledges and begins escort. He signals ahead to DS9 of the coming of this envoy.............TBC

well? good so far? the beauty of this is that we can all bring a different flavor to the story and take it in any direction.

RedShirtGuyNumber1001

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Report this Jul. 29 2009, 5:12 pm

The Captain of the patrol ship clearly does not trust Weyoun, and seeks more information as to what his true purpose is.  Weyoun becomes defensive but does not lose his composure.  "A few years ago you would have been correct to suspect me because I was trying to serve the founders.  I still do, but our founders do not wish what was, we want what is best."

The patrol freighter Captain, "You mean to tell me you don't have the slightest bit of resentment.  If you truely have a heart you can tell what I feel.  Perhaps all of you test tube lifeforms can just forget what was but I never will!"

"That's enough!"  Odo steps out from the back ground.  "You served with me on DS9 did you not?"

"Constable?  They said you were dead."

"Not dead, I returned to my people so they know what I know of man.  I seek to open relations with the Federation on their behalf."

Time for someone to take over.

lamoglia

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Report this Jul. 29 2009, 6:39 pm

wow man awesome!!
next person grab the reigns. i'm ready to but want to give the scope lots of room

OtakuJo

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Report this Jul. 29 2009, 9:33 pm

(I'm kind of sick and no-brainy today so forgive me if this comes across a little peculiar.)

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"How do I know that you are really who you appear to be and not some other Founder?" asked the captain.

"I assure you that I am just as I appear," Odo replied. "However if you wish it, as a token of our good will, we are willing to transport to your ship unarmed and without a Jem'hadar escort.

My mission with the Link was to educate - so that they would no longer distrust the humanoids. Now I see that there is equal need for the Alpha Quadrant to learn to trust my people. I am willing to act in this capacity in order to teach you what I have learnt from my contact with the Link.

First, however, if you would concede to giving myself and Weyoun passage back through the wormhole to Deep Space Nine, there is a message I must relay to Colonel Kira."

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hehe if I were doing this alone I'd go to town with it!! But instead the words shall simply be: TO BE CONTINUED...
Someone else's turn.

lamoglia

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Report this Jul. 29 2009, 11:41 pm

man this is coming out great. good job!!

RedShirtGuyNumber1001

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Report this Jul. 30 2009, 4:41 pm

"Ask Kira if she has watched any Mike Hammer episodes lately?"  The patrol Captain had a very confused look on his face, but understood that this was meaning to show something only Odo knew of Kira and was now willing to trust Odo for the time being.

"Odo you and Weyoun will be transported to our ship, please advise the founders that no Jem'Hadr ships will be permitted into Alpha Quadrant Space."

"Understood, and you have my word."  Odo.

The channel closed.  "Founder these people really seem to hate us."  "Not us Weyoun, the War, the lies, the death.  We all lost something important in that war,"  Odo began to flash back to a familiar memory of when him and Kira were happy together.  However he knew a lot of time had passed, and in his experiences with humans he knew that love was often blind. "That is why it is now time for me to return to Deep Space 9."

continue....

RedShirtGuyNumber1001

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Report this Jul. 31 2009, 4:21 pm

oh come on now keep it going the other games are boring.

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