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Write your own Trek story

DasZuber

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Report this Jan. 28 2008, 1:54 am

One of the things I love about Star Trek, is how they love fan-fiction. It's not often you can create and mold a universe that you are a fan of and I figured I'd give it a shot myself
I'm fairly new to the whole writing scene and, if you decide to read it, I'd love to hear some feedback.
It can be found at http://members.shaw.ca/starscraper/
Star Trek: Starscraper
It's set in the original timeline and is the maiden voyage on a Federation garbage-scowl.
Rock and roll
Thanks for your time

This_Is_Not_A_Test

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Report this Jan. 29 2008, 2:33 pm

The site looks good! Easy to navigate.

A couple of things rght off the bat thought: it's a garbage scow, not a garbage scowl. A scowl is a facial expression. Also, if the ship Max served on previously was named after the explorer, the correct spelling is Shackleton, not Shakelton. And if it isn't a misspelling, you might want to change it, because it's rather distracting to the reader who knows who Ernest Shackleton was.

Good start, though!

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